Friday, May 11, 2012

Rona and the moon

Once a long time ago there lived a lady called Awhina who lived in new zealand. She was sleeping with her children tala and Finau. When both children's woke up they started crying. So Awhina went to check the bucket there was nothing. Oh NO!! she yelled. So she grabbed her jacket and bucket and went outside and followed the path to the lake.

When she was walking she heard some strange noises so she walked faster until she fell in the water. When she got up she got some water. When she was getting the water the bright light just appeared in the sky she said thank goodness. So she went with the water and then the bright light just disappeared. So she walked until she bumped into a tea tree.

So she started Cursing the bright light in the sky. You @#!%$&^ why didn't you tell me that you were going to @#$*^& leave the sky. Then the moon just suddenly spoke some rude words and just started to suck her to the moon. while she was getting sucked in she was trying to grab onto the tea tree but too bad she got sucked up with the tea tree. The End

1 comment:

  1. This is a very good piece of writing isaiah keep it going brother and we did watch Titanic in the holidays


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